Thursday, March 8, 2012

Task 10

1. While doing all this blog i have learned that it is not easy to find ideas to write about. I learned new words, how to create a proper sentence, all these are valuable. The difficulties in completing this task is to find information about the task given.

Task 8

English movie that you have watched, retell the story in your own way and if you are the main character, what would you do if you were experiencing the same situation.

Based on the movie i have watched "The Devil Inside", The story is about a women that wants to do a documentary about her mom. Her mom is believe to be possessed by evil spirit and reportedly have killed 3 members of the church during exorcisms in her own house. Her mom was sent to Italy for treatment. Her daughter which is doing the documentary went to Italy to see her mom after 20 years. The meeting went ugly, but her daughter is determined to prove her mom still can recover. She met two priest and began their investigation. In other to learn more about exorcisms, the women went to observe a real exorcisms with the priests. During the exorcism, the victim that has been possessed, talks different language and knows the story about the womens mom. They were truly shocked, after awhile the priest then makes his final move, the devil then gone. After that, they decided to make an exorcism for the daughters mom. During the exorcisms, the priest heard 4 voices from the mom, it  means that the devil is too strong. After 30 min progress, one of the devil transfer to the priest body. Finally her mom died. the priest then killed himself and transfer to the daughter body. They went to hospital for treatment but nothing changes, they decide to meet another priest. On their way to the priest house. The devil takes over, the car that they drive crashed and all died. THE END. 

If I were the main character I do not want to be involve in this situation. because its too creepy.  But i would be really scare if this happens in front of me. 

Task 7

Favourite story book. Tell about the author, synopsis and explain why do you like the story.


I don't have any favourite story book, but i do have a favourite comic book. The name of the book is Detective Conan, and the author of this book is Gosho Aoyama from Japan. The main character is Shinichi Kudo(Conan), Ran Mouri, and Detective Mouri. Shinichi is a 16 year old high school kid who admire Sherlock Holmes. Ran Mouri is his childhood friend and his father Mouri, works as a detective. One day Shinichi followed a suspicious guy. The guy then knock Shinichi down and experiment him by letting him drink some liquid. The next morning Shinichi founds himself as a 10 year old kid. He change is name to Conan cause he dont want them to know he is Shinichi or else he will be killed by the guy whom let him drink the liquid. Conan was helped by Professor Agasa, he was given a device that would help him in investigation. Conan then met Ran and they became friends, Conan always follow them with the father to an open investigation, usually a crime scene. Conan help them through alot of things including solving the case. Thats all the synopsis about my favorite story comic book.

Taask 6

Common mistake that you always do in writing. what kind of problem? Is it difficult to write in English? What is your suggestion.


 The most common mistake that i usually do in writing is spelling and words that i pick are wrong and unsuitable. Writing in English is easier than speaking the language itself. The problem that i usually encounter is the lack of ideas. I would prefer more reading as a suggestion because by reading, new ideas will slowly develop. 

Task 5

 Paragraph about "water pollution"

Water pollution
What causes water pollution? People nowadays doesn't care about the environment, there are too much garbage thrown to the lake or sea, causes the garbage to push to the shore which makes the view unpleasant. Some factories don't want to waste their money for disposal garbage, so they let the lake become the victim. leaking fuel to the sea are cause by the carelessness of human being which makes many marine creature died.. We should think to save the world, so stop water pollution!  

Task 3


2.In your own word, describe the stages of 'writing process'.
-  There are 5 stages in writing process which is prewriting, drafting, revising, proofreading, and publishing.These writing stages are given to improve writing skills. In the first step, think a topic to write about and brainstorm all the ideas you can get and proceed to step two. On step two, write down the ideas that you have written before. On step three read back your note and try to improve the ideas tat you ave written. By stage four, make all the sentences in good spelling, check all. On the last step, post your finished writing and let your friends read it. Get comment from them.

Task 2

 Two sentences for each type of sentence structure.
Simple
-       Some students like to play football in the afternoon.
-       Ali plays football every afternoon,

Compound
-       Abu likes to play badminton, but ali doesn’t.
-       Ali wins the football match for his father.

Complex
-       After they finished playing, ali and abu went for a movie.
-       They are studying because they have a test tomorrow.

Compound-complex
-       Abu likes to study, but ali doesn’t. after ali finished studying, they went out for a coffee.
-       Although I love to play badminton, I don’t have the time to play lately, and I haven’t found anyone to play with.